But almost like me.
You are not me,
But so much within me.
You are not me,
But always a part of me.
You are not me,
But always so close to me.
Here I pay Tribute to that You whom
I’m relentlessly trying to explore, understand, discover.
[My unsuccessful attempt to write a testimonial for my soul]
6 comments:
introspection ta bhaloi hoyeche.....chaliye jao.. :)
soulful! but tantalizing, why not develop it a bit? even gibran would exhume himself and take notice!
It was my deliberate attempt to keep the post spontaneous and unedited.
I do agree there are rooms for improvement in it. But then it's not always that u get a chance to write something in a trance.
for god's sake i was not suggesting any improvement. spare me this embarassment please. i was only trying to say that it ended too soon and too suddenly. never mind, all good things in life end like that. please stop taking me seriously my friend.
Criticisms are always welcome. So no need to feel embarassed.
Awesome :)
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